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Overall, I thought David’s project was great! I really liked the wood stove imagery, as I really think it drove the purpose of the project home, while giving a nice visual to look at. I can tell that he put a lot of thought into what exactly he wanted his image to portray, and how it loops back into explaining the Zaire Ebola virus. Super clever!
I will say that I was a bit confused as I began reading, due to having no knowledge about the Ebola virus, but in the second half of the text, David explained the virus itself. My suggestion would be to flip the passage about the imagery, and the passage about the virus, so then your reader knows exactly what they’re supposed to be looking for in the image.
In summary, the Zaire Ebola virus is an illness that attacks the immune system, after being transmitted through bodily fluids. The virus, EBOV, attacks the immune system by infecting the dendritic cells, monocytes, macrophages, lymph nodes, spleen, and liver. It is an extremely deadly virus, damaging both muscle and nervous cells.
Overall, I thought David’s project was great! I really liked the wood stove imagery, as I really think it drove the purpose of the project home, while giving a nice visual to look at. I can tell that he put a lot of thought into what exactly he wanted his image to portray, and how it loops back into explaining the Zaire Ebola virus. Super clever!
I will say that I was a bit confused as I began reading, due to having no knowledge about the Ebola virus, but in the second half of the text, David explained the virus itself. My suggestion would be to flip the passage about the imagery, and the passage about the virus, so then your reader knows exactly what they’re supposed to be looking for in the image.
In summary, the Zaire Ebola virus is an illness that attacks the immune system, after being transmitted through bodily fluids. The virus, EBOV, attacks the immune system by infecting the dendritic cells, monocytes, macrophages, lymph nodes, spleen, and liver. It is an extremely deadly virus, damaging both muscle and nervous cells.