First and foremost, the artist skills look amazing! My eyes immediately glanced at the clay models because art has always came unnatural to me and I envy people who make art models because I wish I was really good at art. and how well they were shaped and labeled.. Although the heart clay models look extremely accurate, the lack of explanation of the clay models and what you were trying to get across was unclear to me. If I was to do this project I would expect a more narrowed version of the heart topic because just “the heart” is a pretty broad idea. Another suggestion I would say to you is try and focus on a more in depth topic. The lack of words had me a little lost when trying to figure out what point you were trying to get across. To fix this issue I would’ve loved to see a summary of the project written into a essay like we were asked to do because at least I could picture the image of what you were focusing on and bring your project into life. Overall you did super well with the clay models and I did love the labeling of the different factors in the heart. Something I would take away from my abstract would be that in future projects you include a bit more writing within it and to write an idea so I’m not confused looking at the models. Your project was very nice and your choice of having the “Anterior” and “Posterior” above the models because someone could’ve just said that one of them was the front view and the other one was the back view.
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First and foremost, the artist skills look amazing! My eyes immediately glanced at the clay models because art has always came unnatural to me and I envy people who make art models because I wish I was really good at art. and how well they were shaped and labeled.. Although the heart clay models look extremely accurate, the lack of explanation of the clay models and what you were trying to get across was unclear to me. If I was to do this project I would expect a more narrowed version of the heart topic because just “the heart” is a pretty broad idea. Another suggestion I would say to you is try and focus on a more in depth topic. The lack of words had me a little lost when trying to figure out what point you were trying to get across. To fix this issue I would’ve loved to see a summary of the project written into a essay like we were asked to do because at least I could picture the image of what you were focusing on and bring your project into life. Overall you did super well with the clay models and I did love the labeling of the different factors in the heart. Something I would take away from my abstract would be that in future projects you include a bit more writing within it and to write an idea so I’m not confused looking at the models. Your project was very nice and your choice of having the “Anterior” and “Posterior” above the models because someone could’ve just said that one of them was the front view and the other one was the back view.