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  1. You produced a great Steam Project! The topic is interesting and related to you, which is nice. I love the amount of detail and creativity you put into it. Creating a video is really hard and takes a lot of time, so it is amazing that you dedicated this project so much effort. I really like the intro to your video. The melody and words are catching and stick in your head. The animations are entertaining and really fitting. I would criticize that the introduction is a little too long compared to the actual scientific part of the video. However, it didn’t disturb the video in any way and I enjoyed it, so it’s not a problem. I like that you did the video personalized, showed yourself with a basketball and also dressed up as a professor in the lab. The bow tie is a nice detail. I enjoyed how you presented your topic about the respiratory and cardiovascular system during exercise. You used the torso model, beaks and animations to illustrate what you are explaining, which helps the viewer understanding the content better. You also drew and showed concepts on the board, which was a nice touch. You seem very confident in your knowledge and I could tell by the way you explained it to your audience. The jokes you incorporated were funny and helpful to keep the audience’s attention. It is nice that you created the video for a big audience because you explain the topic in a way not only scientists but also students can understand it well.

    Cosima Schmiedel

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